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So I've taken alot of time off for the book, but now that it's published, I thought I'd write another poem based on......errrrrr recent circumstances....whatcha think? (still rusty from the change in writing styles) Immortal roads Over and over The trees we see So walk the dirt road |
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So yeah......I'm not on here often and I've been busy with work and such. But just so everyone knows. The book is out and is here http://www.lulu.com/content/102041 You know what to do..... |
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I come from the far away land of Heresen to let you all know the book is now indeed complete, and i will be starting editing on it shortly. More to follow..... |
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I figure....yeah update people who cant get on it. I've now just finished Chapter 6's rough draft over there in happy deepfrostt and for those who havent gone to visit, Chapter 1 and 2 is public so you can whet your appetite with it. Go read...... |
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So, for those who've been paying attention, My book is well underway. I'm gonna start narrowing my focus group, so less and less people will be able to read the book until its done. I appreciate the people who want to read it, and give me feedback to help edit my book, but i don't want the entire world reading it yet. Chapter 1 and possibly 2 will be available to the world, the rest, will be by friends only. So those who want to help me, and read chapters as they're written, leave me a message or forever hold your piece. The journal's at http://deepfrostt.livejournal.com/ |
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So I guess It's been awhile......well suffice to say I've been busy, but good news? I'm putting a hold on my poetry, for something bigger....I'll be attempting to write a novel......I'm still in the brainstorming stages, but once I get it underway, I'll be posting a private site or area or whatever, so that those with permission can get into it? So if you have any interest in reading it, let me know |
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Sorry I haven't been around, But I just cooked up this new poem right now, as I've been reinspired...for the time being...enjoy Dark Dreams Hand on hand, We dance to the chorus, and step As many have done before us. You're different from anyone I know, ever cautiously, our movements slow. You are Poison to my veins, and blacken my worldly sight, onto my thoughts it rains, and my soul dims it's light. This is why dreams dance in our minds, to leave the wicked minions far behind, You cannot see me in this glowing light, I can hide from you on this phantasmic night. With my last breath, I taste bloodly tears, But my heart says you cannot win this war, ever so beautiful, you're face still leers, and power, from all my love you draw. You've broken my body, a triumph you enjoy, It leaves you a witch, feeling ever so coy, But once locked in chains of your lies, Freedom for me, a new beginning cries. meh, not my best. sorry |
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SOOOOO...... I finally got my book back, I've just been lazy, But finally, I'm gonna post a new one.....This one's FOR YOU!! The Heart of a Lioness I thought life gave up on me, As if no one could ever care, Then you came and made me see, That we could make a perfect pair. Something in your eyes, Like a faceted crystal, My heart punds and flies, And then quiets down to a lull. Now I live for your lip's soft kiss, like the ocean's never ending glory, For the look in your eyes, Like the skies beautiful story. The reason I need your love, I feel the lion's glassy trance, How your words sing to my mind, All for the Dreamer's dance. And you never let me down, When I was lowest of all, You still wore your crown, and stopped me from my fall. When your aura glowed brighter than the northern lights, and your skin shimmered like a sheet of gold, when you spun the room like a decorated top, and left my heart in your arms, when I gave it to you to hold.
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Soooo, I'm cut off from most of my poetry for right now, good news is I do have some saved here, So I'm posting two now, A poem and response Here's the first one, closely followed by the second The Heart Broken Sun Your sitting in the heat, of the heart-broken sun, where you hope to meet, that special someone. The sun reflects off the tears, as they slowly run down your face, and you thought they cared. There's no one who could replace. Your time together, as flawless as that sphere. Now it has waned forever, Like the lunar orb, has disappeared. The sun slowly sets, behind the horizon, And leaves you with its sad debts, But shows the earth's other son. You never looked at what you had, but you'll take a look around now, too late. Last look, you feel that bad, Your swift fingers seal your fate. It 's a sin to see you in the sun's eyes, If you only knew while you were there, So was I, and I had tried, To call out the angel's name you bear.
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So here's a response to the first poem (Heart-Broken Sun) You like yes? Graced Moon The moon lights up your face, as you slowly cry out my name, the grass shows its grace, is this really why came? I returned from the moon, to see where I went wrong, and I must return soon, Now I faintly hear your sad song. This field and the secrets it holds, a deer drinks from the stream, Then stares at you with your heart of gold, Its like a perfect dream. Who would've thought, I had died here? And it's I you sought, When you came here? Its still, silent and dark, you'll stay here forever, As still as a rock. You're three days from never. I must go now, But I'll be with you forever, and we'll see how, We both belonged together.
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So I just Finished this one, Let's see what you think of it. Legions of Hope Trust the Fire we burn within, Truth is all we ask to seek, but if shadows could reveal secrets, Doom would ring to a darker chorus, As life ends before it begins. Flame streaks across your listless face, And you hide no attempt to speak a lie, Mayhap why frost forms upon your eyes, while misshapen word fight the tears, and the immortals bow in dismay. A threshold no longer stands straight, where the ethereal door sings enchanted, hope for tomorrow within a light shines, mirrors address the shades in defeat, and so begins our twisted dance. Time slows when the hourglass cracks, hands show the nervous death of truths, they touch between flame and frost, there ceases to be a difference, and we reflect opposing feelings. Accept what we see before us, Just to deny what we've known, Fear is our lost cause to dream, To go against every hope we carry, this dungeon echoes our silent screams. A fog leaves an uncertain daze, just above where the tide changes, We release every wave within our lips, to destroy this magical solstice of lore, and bring us wrecked upon life.
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Meh, New poem, it's the long one no one gets anyways...so go ahead, see if you can't figure it out, I'm just in that kind of mood right now. Act III Scene IV (Enter Hero and Villian) A hero's monologue I deserve, Up to this scene I've held my nerve. For my lady I will put on a dazzling show, As I meet and conquer my foe. In diablo's shadow is he hiding? He knows the brave one he'll be fighting. Over there I can surely see him now, But with quickness he moves and I know not how. It was only the branches in the breeze. Wait now, my lady comes without ease. Behind the crumbling wall I'll hide, For it appears more than two tears she's cried. With a pitiful song, she sings my name, as it slowly begins to rain. Shall I comfort her by her side? It looks just as if she had died. Has my nemesis hurt her this very night? I'll know my answer by dawn's first light. But what is it she holds tight in her hand? The letter I wrote, of a wedding beautifully planned. so she does miss her knight so brave? Or does she think me just a knave? She's torn the paper, while my heart splits in two. And her shining tears leave a beautiful dew. what could this mean? her eyes turn to a steady stream. my life's turned to naught. for only her heart was it that I sought. Is there any possible chance, that in my warrior-like trance... no it would be impossibly so, I could have never sunken so low. But perhaps in the dark of the night, whilst I was holding her tight, inside her began a burning flame, one that held her lover's name. ah now my enemy arrives on the scene, I strike as if caught in a ghastly dream, blood trickles down his chest, as I've put this villian to rest. A sickly feeling rushes to my gut, as the red spills out of my cut, I never realized what I'd done, I had killed the lover's true one. |
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Eh, so I finally decided to make one of these.....things. As to whether I'll actually use it, who knows, Maybe to posts rants and my.....unique writing styles. I'll kick it off with one of my older poems I just found in the Basement The Storm
Walking in dreams, Sleeping in the dark, You're leaving your tender footsteps, upon this desolate Bard, Shedding light to the sleepers of Lore, And protecting my lost Past. Rain brushes against your skin, and rivelets form along my spine, As all hope was broken, Like a Thunder roar, so far away. You smiled at my solitary song, A beauty that encompassed my vision. I turned to the sky for questions, For I knew all the answers. A miracle came upon my hands, It was one that came with a gift. For one lost soul, another gained, In the love of my eye's light. What happened today, No one may ever know, For only angels could conquer Such an unseen fatal twist, and though the road may cover in fog, Happiness at the end is what we all hope to see. ~That is all for now, more to come if you so desire?~
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